Good Bye December
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| Bye Bye December! |
Cold days with the foggy night
Its the December with no sunlight
In front of the fire, I am warming my hands
Everyone is laughing in this beautiful land
Tea in the evening made me warm
All besides me sitting in a swarm
We played a game called truth or dare
The one who chose the truth had to bear
I chose the truth, and they opened the file
The questions came to me like a missile
I have the chance to say it correct
l made a story, and everyone got wept
The memory I told them with a little fantasy
Moved their hearts with a greater propensity
The turn of everyone came in due time
Enjoyed by everyone, this moment prime
I will never forget and will always remember
Saying goodbye to this last day of December
Good Bye December
Reviewed by Mehmood Ul Haq
on
December 31, 2023
Rating:
Reviewed by Mehmood Ul Haq
on
December 31, 2023
Rating:
4 comments
"Your December poem is a delightful journey through a winter evening, skillfully blending warmth, laughter, and a touch of nostalgia. The choice of truth or dare adds a playful twist, and your storytelling skill shines as you weave a tale that resonates with both reality and fantasy. The emotions conveyed are vivid and relatable, creating a beautifully vivid snapshot of a December night. Well-crafted and evocative!"
Your poetic depiction of a December evening is truly enchanting. The vivid imagery of cold days, foggy nights, and the warmth of a fire creates a tangible atmosphere. The game of truth or dare adds an interactive touch, and the emotions expressed in the shared memories resonate deeply. Your words paint a picture of a cherished moment, making the reader feel the warmth and nostalgia of that December night. Well done!
Your poem beautifully explain cozy December nights and story of truth or dare brought tears and joy creating memories that last forever.
really wonderful and charming dipiction of December.The way presenting the thoughts of truth and dear is really a joyful thought
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